Monday, October 18, 2010

self evaluation for task two

  • What is the thesis for your paper? She now has three kids, a husband and her LPN license, she completed her dream. 
  • List the main points you make in your paper. Why she waited so long to go back. Some of the struggles she ha going back with three kids. Would she change her career choice. Working endless jobs 
  • What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? Finding a thesis, helping with fragments 
  • What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? Things that i could do to improve my paper.
  • How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting? i had two drafts and i pre- wrote an outline and i also produce the entire draft in one session. 
  • What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? i think i actually had a good handle on this paper, but could have used a few more supporting details. 
  • What are most pleased with about this paper? The outcome, i thought this paper was going to be difficult to write but in the end was actually pretty easy. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Krista,

    I'm happy with the outcome of the draft as well. I can tell that you had more time with this draft than the last task paper. Sometimes our lives catch up to us and affect our lives in someway; in this case, it affected Task 1. You do have the opportunity to revise Task 1 if you choose.

    Ms. C

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