Self evaluations task three

• What is the thesis for your paper? I couldn't really find a thesis for this paper but the main point was that i was going to fail high school
• List the main points you make in your paper.  I hung out with wrong crowd, was going to fail high school, i had to go to an alternative school to finish.
• What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? Finding a thesis, helping with fragments comparing the essay with my experiences
• What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? Things that i could do to improve my paper. Getting to read other peoples papers gave mea better idea
• How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?. i did like 2 different drafts could have probably did more.
• What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? compare more to the essays.
• What are most pleased with about this paper? i thought this paper was very hard to write not pleases with it.